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Journalism Class : 6A2

Topic : News Stories (Event/Place/Person)/ Review Movie/ Advertisement News

Commentator : Raita Juliah/2088203063/6A2

My peer assessment comment on news writings mechanics https://sunnyside.blogspot.com/2023/06/meet-11.html

Assessing Mechanics	Outstanding	Strong	Adequate	Minimal
Spelling		The spelling in your news writing is excellent, and it falls into the "strong" category for each vocabulary item that you offer.
Grammar	The grammar follows writing standards as well, as seen by the vocabulary log table in the definition section and sample sentences in each vocabulary. Not only that, but your grammar looks great when writing summaries and reflections on your blog.
Punctuation/Mark		Punctuation marks have been put in the appropriate spot. Periods, commas, and quote marks are all required.
Complete sentences		Sentences are written in complete and in the correct order.
Correct use of capitalization		Capital letters have been used in the appropriate places, such as at the beginning of phrases and place names.

My peer assessment comment on news writings contents https://sunnyside.blogspot.com/

Assessing Ideas & Content of the News	Outstanding	Strong	Adequate	Minimal
Well-stated topic sentence in the headline	The content offered relates to the blog's title. Because the main sentence is constructed in an unique manner, the supporting sentences are quite impressive.
Well-stated author in by line		The author's name has been set in accordance with his position. so that all readers can learn who the author of this site is.
Use a logical plan (4w+h) in the lead.		The lead is written based on the writing technique, which is 4W + 1H.
Existed quotation with correct capitalization, grammar, & mark	The quotations used are direct quotations with capitalization and proper punctuation.
Well-ended with insightful messages to the viewers/readers	The words and messages are skillfully communicated so that they reach the readers' thoughts and hearts.
A pretty good flow of ideas from topic sentence to details in sequence		The concepts communicated from the topic phrase through the mandate were straightforward and there was no misunderstanding.

Journalism Class : 6A2

Topic : News Stories (Event/Place/Person)/ Review Movie/ Advertisement News

Commentator : Raita Juliah/2088203063/6A2

My peer assessment comment on news writings mechanics https://madamwiw.blogspot.com/2023/06/meet-11.html

Assessing Mechanics	Outstanding	Strong	Adequate	Minimal
Spelling		In the news writing that you write, the spelling is good and it is included in the "strong" category for each vocabulary that you include.
Grammar		The grammar is also in accordance with the rules of writing, I saw it in the vocabulary log table in the definition section and example sentences in each vocabulary.
Punctuation/Mark		Punctuation marks have been placed according to the position they should be. Both periods, commas and quotation marks.
Complete sentences			Sentences are written in full and in accordance with the order.
Correct use of capitalization		The use of capital letters has been placed according to its place both at the beginning of sentences and place names etc.

My peer assessment comment on news writings contents https://madamwiw.blogspot.com/

Assessing Ideas & Content of the News	Outstanding	Strong	Adequate	Minimal
Well-stated topic sentence in the headline		The content presented is in accordance with the title on the blog. The topic sentence is written in a unique way so that the supporting sentences are very impressive.
Well-stated author in by line		The author's name has been placed according to his position. So that all readers can find out who the author of this blog is.
Use a logical plan (4w+h) in the lead.			On the lead, it is according to the writing strategy, namely using 4W + 1H.
Existed quotation with correct capitalization, grammar, & mark		The messages are well conveyed so that they reach the minds and hearts of the readers.
Well-ended with insightful messages to the viewers/readers		Quotations used use direct quotations with capitalization and the use of appropriate punctuation.
A pretty good flow of ideas from topic sentence to details in sequence		The ideas conveyed from the topic sentence to the mandate were conveyed clearly and there was not the slightest ambiguity.

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